You've posted this one before. I remember it. I don't know how this story was passed over for publication or award. I don't know how a whole lot of your writing could be passed over. It's damned good. Your use of detail is a thing of beauty -- as good as any I've seen. Keep going. (I know you have to, but I want to encourage you.) P.S. Now I wonder if I missed the Penn Station typo in one of your drafts. :0
You've posted this one before. I remember it. I don't know how this story was passed over for publication or award. I don't know how a whole lot of your writing could be passed over. It's damned good. Your use of detail is a thing of beauty -- as good as any I've seen. Keep going. (I know you have to, but I want to encourage you.) P.S. Now I wonder if I missed the Penn Station typo in one of your drafts. :0